MotorManiac

Hey,

OK I just made some simple changes to it not much. what do u guys think.

http://home.comcast.net/~motormaniac/

Any advice on what content i could put on my page to fix the "empty" feeling on my pages?

I know i have nothing under my portfolio page right now or services but i got my first customer a week ago so...

R8515198

I think if you center the page it would look just that little bit better as I am on wide screen and it to the left.

very simple to do

body {
width: 780px;
margin: 0 auto;
color: #fff;
}

MotorManiac

It doesn't work, i don't think. will someone look at my code and help me.

any other reviews?

Lchad

Hey...
It's centered so I'm guessing you got that to work!

Can you put the text of the navigations in the center vertically? You will probably have to add top padding to achieve that.

Gosh.. to be this good at 14!! Makes me so jealous!

Nice colors. Soft to the eye. Not going to mention the long pages because I'm sure they are just waiting for content.

On the portfolio page I think a nice icon for "launch site" would be nice. Those are a bit big and bulky right now.

You know the part that says Evolution, constantly evolving. That's kind of a cool angle. I was wondering since that is spaced far apart and that you have so much room.. how would a definition from the dictionary look?
ev·o·lu·tion - any process of formation or growth; development

This ones too long but maybe it could be shortened (A gradual process in which something changes into a different and usually more complex or better form.)

I don't know.. just thought it might be a nice idea!

MotorManiac

yea, i see what u mean about the buttons text center verticaly, im working on it. and thats a great idea about the definition thing. thats awsome. im changing it right now. thank you so much.

o yea i changed the contact page. see if you guys like it better. its basically a pic i added.

Lchad

Yeah the pic on the contact page is fine.
Anxious to see what other changes you make!

MotorManiac

I thank you again for the banner idea i uploaded it see what u think

Lchad

ooooooooo... very nice!!!

Here's a thought... am I being bossy?
ev-o-lu-tion - noun: development of something ....blah blah blah
Maybe delete the first evolution and just use the dictionary one.

Try to work the word evolution into your homepage text as well. That way people will understand why it's your tagline.

MotorManiac

No your not bossy, i am always willing to take advice from an expert.

Besides I was just thinking about that.

im working on a form for my email page.

i made new icons for the portfolio page, they are not very good i am just using them as an idea, they took me like 3 min to make so...

Lchad

That's a better definition for sure! It's coming!

Ok.. the new icons for launch site.. sort of look like 3 minutes graphics.. but you said it so I'm not feeling bad! hahahahah

Keep us posted!

MotorManiac

ok im making a form for my contact page. I've never done forms before. I was wondering if you could explain them a little bit to me. Also i have it right now so that when you sumbmit the info the computers deafault email tool opens. How do i get it so that no email tool opens when i send it.