Hiya,
I think overall the colour scheme looks very nice and the site has potential. A couple of things I would look at:
- Flash animation "refer a friend": Is there any reason as to why you chose to display the offer that way? What you are creating is an illusion of being a non-site ad or one of those "page created by myspace page generator" banners. Meaning this animation has hardly any value. I was reluctant clicking on it. Now that I did I am sad I wasted time bothering. There are much better ways to show the offer within the site, so why not do that?
- Navigation: no home link? -> Accessibility / usability issue
- Home page - how it works / how we can help: This is a nice approach, but why not let the animation run on its own if not being clicked on for a while?
- I think overall this approach hides more information than necessary. It seems to me as if you want to save space, but for the wrong reasons at times. This goes for the whole site
- Home page - key features: you are hiding important information behind a "+" here. Why?
- How can we help pages: I am not sure the page layout works for you. You have a lot of content, but users have to crawl through a number of clicks to actually get to the core of the information they are after. The "How can we help you" main page is hiding a lot of good information behind only 2-3 lines. There is really no reason for that
- How can we help pages: vital cross-linking and call to actions are not present
- Where we buy page: would a map not do? Or at least add value?
- How it works page: I have been in the legal business for some time, I would be amazed that your time is 1 week! If you are claiming this then at least back it up with testimonials, case studies, articles about this. "Proof, or it didn't happen". You have a link to the Times page, but that still doesn't tell your customers you're any good I'm afraid
- Why use us page: Here you are using a different layout as opposed to the layout you established under "How can we help you". Is there a reason? Why not merge both layouts - best of both worlds?
I think overall the site looks very good, but the layout and overall usability (and content) need a bit more work here and there. The "How can we help you" section for example is big, but it doesn't do anything. I can imagine that many users would drop off here and go elsewhere.
Hope this helps,
ALEX