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November 28th, 2006, 03:20 PM
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Can you take a look at my Graphic?
I'm starting a website - which is in its VERY basic stages - and I have just started to do the graphics for the site and here's my first graphic - the header.
I don't like the devil guy - there was a big empty space there though.
Any and all comments appreciated.
Thanks,
Dapandyman.
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November 28th, 2006, 03:33 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Wow - wheres the chocolate?
Theres to much black at the bottom!
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November 28th, 2006, 03:46 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Yeah - I thought so, but it can easily be cut from the image.
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November 28th, 2006, 03:46 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
hehe i like chocolate - what can i say
Seriously - that graphic needs a cube of chocolate!
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November 28th, 2006, 03:52 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Riiiiiiiiiiggght.
*Drifts off and wonders how to incorporate a chocolate cube for Dan...*
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November 28th, 2006, 03:55 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
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November 28th, 2006, 04:12 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
looks good, just need to cut out space at the bottom...!!
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November 28th, 2006, 04:12 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
That's a very friendly looking Devil. Seems like he should be more angry since the name is Tantrum. 
It's a good start, but a bit boring... and quite newbie looking...
Maybe change up the swirl to something different other than the glittery looking fill?
How about a gradient background or some lighting behind the devil?
Not sure about the Chocolate...... Dan must be having a craving! |
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November 28th, 2006, 04:16 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
The question is: When does Dan not Crave Chocolate??
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November 28th, 2006, 04:36 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
I'm gonna take your points into consideration, edit and repost either tonight or tomorrow.
The devil is gon' get his EVIL on! lol
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The question is: When does Dan not Crave Chocolate??
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November 28th, 2006, 04:50 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Hmmmm pondering over what gradient to use....
The old fashioned B&W or something a bit more special?
Meh.... I'll post it up first then comments can be made about the gradient.
Holy s**t! I have become a doubleposter!
*commits suicide*
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November 28th, 2006, 05:13 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
right - not so much a gradient, no more 'glittery' fill for the text, might do some lighting for the devil not sure...
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November 28th, 2006, 06:30 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Oh, that is nice...total improvement from the first one!! That looks much more professional!!
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November 28th, 2006, 07:20 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
That is now one mean lookin' devil!
Much better! Love the gradient! |
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November 29th, 2006, 12:14 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
I still dont think it loooks very professional,Try getting rid of the jagged edges and the soft edge around the letters, i also dontn like whats inside the 2 swoppy things
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November 29th, 2006, 12:53 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Yeah - I'll soften up the edges and think up something for the swoops - i didnt have much time last night.
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November 29th, 2006, 07:26 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
I have to disagree about the gradient background. I don't like it.
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November 30th, 2006, 02:40 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
I will start again - it doesnt look right...
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November 30th, 2006, 03:00 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
Ahh...but that is the way you learn!!
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November 30th, 2006, 04:45 PM
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Re: Can you take a look at my Graphic?
I might continue editing this one but i just had an idea that i think would look good.
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